We have been learning about poems. We were inspired by Frank Kendon's poem The Looker-On. We had to create a poem to describe part of the school. Here is my poem.
Hi Javanah I like your poem because it gives me a picture in my head while I read it. I can imagine it in my head to. I like the part where you said big red foot prints keeping kids safe.
Hey Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem about the front of the school. Your story was amazing and really hook me in.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it gives me a picture in my head while I read it. I can imagine it in my head to. I like the part where you said big red foot prints keeping kids safe.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it is detailed the way you describe it. I can just imagine hearing the kids chatting.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, it is really amazing. How did you think of the describing words. I would like to no more about your poem.
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