In He Puna Kawenga we have been talking and writing about feelings or Emotions. There are different ways to feel , like happy, sad and mad. Here is my poem about anger.
Hi Javanah I like your Emotions poem because the background matches the fire in the little guy's head. It looks like you have spent a lot of time on it.
Hi Javanah I like your emotion poem you made me have a picture in my mind of someone that is angry. The picture that is a angry person is cool because he looked very angry. The colors that you used for your background looks like colors you would have if you were mad. Was it fun to do because it looks fun to make.
Hi Javanah I like your poem it looks cool. Your character looks really really angry I hope he dosent explode in my face.I also like your background because it matches your character.
Hi Javanah. I like how you described the feeling anger because you used lots of describing words. Can you tell me more about anger because I don´t know much about the feelings of anger.
Hello Javanah I really like your emotion poem because it describes anger and the background to. I also love the little guy of Inside Out because it really matches the background.
Hey Javanah I really like your emotion poem because its really descriptive and sometimes relative to me. Sometimes I get that angry as well when my brother annoys me .
Hi Javanah I like your emotion poem because you made me have a picture in my mind of someone that is angry. The picture that is an angry person is cool because he looked very angry. The colours of your background matches the angry guys head.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your Emotions poem because the background matches the fire in the little guy's head. It looks like you have spent a lot of time on it.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your emotion poem you made me have a picture in my mind of someone that is angry. The picture that is a angry person is cool because he looked very angry. The colors that you used for your background looks like colors you would have if you were mad. Was it fun to do because it looks fun to make.
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem it looks cool. Your character looks really really angry I hope he dosent explode in my face.I also like your background because it matches your character.
Hi Javanah.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described the feeling anger because you used lots of describing words. Can you tell me more about anger because I don´t know much about the feelings of anger.
Hello Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your poem because it is so interesting. When I looked at it made me think if you were angry when you wrote it.
HI Javanah
ReplyDeleteYour poem is really creative. I really see you spent a lot of time on your poem. Your poem describes how people feel when they are angry.
Hey Javanah
ReplyDeleteAnger scared me, I love your work.The poem is perfect. If you were in a competition I would give you a amazing prize!
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your emotion poem. I think you did a good job describing your emotion poem. Why did you chose anger?
Hey Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your emotion poem because I really see you spent a lot of time on your poem. Why did you chose anger?
Hello Javanah
ReplyDeleteI really like your emotion poem because it describes anger and the background to. I also love the little guy of Inside Out because it really matches the background.
Hey Javanah
ReplyDeleteI really like your emotion poem because its really descriptive and sometimes relative to me. Sometimes I get that angry as well when my brother annoys me .
Hi Javanah
ReplyDeleteI like your emotion poem because you made me have a picture in my mind of someone that is angry. The picture that is an angry person is cool because he looked very angry. The colours of your background matches the angry guys head.